Hi Ashley! I think your stuff is beautiful...I wouldn't mind owning a few of them :P I also think your photos are nice and eye-catching. Maybe tone down the top black half of the photos, but I don't think it's that big a deal. The only thing I'd say you're missing is an about section. I would post some updates of some behind the scenes photos, and an interesting story in your about section to attract people.
My shop is new as well and any feedback from anyone is welcome!
https://www.etsy.com/shop/ShopAetheriaThanks,
Lilit