Constructive critique and feedback would be appreciated!

[LoveNCreativity]

Hi everyone! I'm a new seller (opened shop in November) and in the short time I've been here, I've quickly grown to LOVE Etsy. I worked hard on my titles and tags by reading the discussions, and tried to take better pictures. I know there's still lots to learn and that my shop is no where near the standards of the popular sellers on here, so I hope to get some outside perspective on what to work on.

It's okay to be brutally honest about your impression of my shop or anything you dislike about it. I'll go put my big girl panties on :D

Thanks so much in advance for any help!

[Former_Member]

Hi!

Your shop is so bright and lovely!

Here are my comments:
1. Work on your banner. You can choose a better font maybe, more fun, bubbly font :)

2. Your photos can be better! :) I like the white background. :)
There is one thing here on etsy I read before that tells us what kinds of photos we should have
a. against white background b. close up shot c. lifetsyle shot.. like, what would it look like on a bag as a keychain? or.. as something... you know ? :) with a model.. a bag, pencil case, make up bag, etc. d... i forgot, :)) packaging is a good idea :)

3. Add more and more products! :) They said it imrpoves how we can be found. :)

Considering that you've just opened last Nov and have had 40+ sales !!! :) that's awesome!!!! just keep on improving on your craft! :)

Good luck!

[LoveNCreativity]

Thanks Ena for your helpful response! I love your suggestions. First, they made me think of making a hand drawn banner! I was having trouble with finding a program that can make nice banners but then realized why not hand draw my banner like I do for my greeting cards?! Also, the suggestions for different photos are awesome! I'll need to get to picture taking :D and I definitely agree on the adding more items to be seen more! Thanks! Btw I love your jewelries!!