Hey Tiffany! The content sounds great! I loved reading your story. I wouldn't change a thing as far as content goes. I did want to point out a few grammar/sentence structure nonsense that I would want to know--it's hard to see that in your own writing sometimes!
Check out this paragraph:
Since then, I have worked in the retail floral industry for the for 11 years. This is where I have defined my creative modern style and my acute attention to detail. during this time I have gained much experience in the wedding floral field, and have created thousands of fresh bridal and bridesmaids bouquets and hundreds of complete wedding flowers for wonderful couples across Iowa.
There are a couple of typos: first sentence for is used one too many times. "During" at the beginning of the 3rd sentence isn't capitalized. Maybe break that last sentence into 2?
And this paragraph:
In 2012 I decided that it was time to start working for myself and run a small business, Studio Bloom. My Etsy shop allows me to bring my designs to the internet to reach a broader range of people all over the United States.
Maybe add a comma after 2012 and re word "run a small business, Studio Bloom" to something like "run a small business called Studio Bloom" or "...small business--Studio Bloom." It might flow better that way.
Last one:
I know there are endless options for brides and consumers today, and it means a gread deal to me that you may be considering me for purchasing something special or something for one of the most important days of your life!
Love what you're saying here--this may be my favorite part! You made me want to stick with you and I'm not even getting married! :) I might would make this into 2 sentences or something. Maybe something like "I know there are many options for brides and consumers today, so it means a great deal that you would consider my shop to provide items for such an important day."
Again, LOVE your story and how you tell it. I can definitely tell your heart is behind your products. Which would make me want to buy from you! And that is more important than a few commas. I just wanted to make sure you were aware of those things!! :)