Amber...
Very nice product line. Your banner is fine, it fits into the "Advertising Rules" of simple design and a basic catchy color scheme of 3 colors. It is the "norm" of any business advertising. Naturally we are here at Etsy, Artistic central, so making a more creative banner is great too.Your photos are nice, but... You need to zoom out a little so the whole product is in the thumbnail. Sometimes you can tweek them without taking new photos, when you edit your listing there is a pen icon under your photo, it will give you options for how you want your thumbnail to look. Check it out. Also, Etsy is Gretsy and has a need for completion, my advice is to fill all five available photo spots, they dont look at the content, just the stats. One more thing, use Marmalead.com to tweek your tags, I had a hard time searching for your products and found 1 like 6 pages in. Marmalead is made to help Etsy sellers get a step above the competition.
