I've been selling off and on on Etsy (I used to bead back in the day, then progressed to metalwork) since the site opened, and I know it can be frustrating when you first start out. I'd be happy to do an in depth critique for anyone interested. It's through Fiverr.com, because a good critique takes time. I hope you think it would be worth $5!
Here's the link: fiverr.com/withahammer/do-an-in-depth-critique-of-your-etsy-store
