What do you think I need to change???

[PawtyPawsStudio]

Hi everyone,
I am just looking for some input as to what you think I may need to
change to make it a better experience not only for me but my
customer's to have a good shopping experience.
Do I need to work on my photos? How are my listing titles & key words?
What do you think of the overall shop appearance?

Thank you for any help, it is greatly appreciated!

[Former_Member]

Hello, will be the first to voice out my opinion, though I am not the best at critique, but I'd say maybe you should write "dog bow tie" instead of dog bow.

Look at other sellers who sell similar things and inspire from them. Some of them are quite successful.

Consider this one, as an example
https://www.etsy.com/shop/thesouthernpup?ref=l2-shopheader-name

The photos look good and the items are pretty.

It is also good that you write the way they were produced, sizes and shipping policy.

Yet, it's might be me, but the description is so long.

Sorry, I know it was weak but still hope it helped.

[ToyIsland]

Hi- I like your shop a lot and also love dogs and think you have great quality items for them. The banner is adorable, items very fun bright and colorful. Maybe try adding leashes, harnesses for dogs with your bows? Your bows are great so maybe try that to draw more attention and people? Good luck!

[PawtyPawsStudio]

Thank you for your thoughts!

[Former_Member]

Hi Mary!

I think your shop is so sweet! As a dog lover, I love seeing cute dogs at the top of the page. I think the initial picture of the products look great and clean cut, but I think it'd also be neat to see some of the products on actual dogs. For example, because I can only see the front of the "Just BOO-tiful" bow I can't really tell what it looks like on.

It also may be a neat idea to create a logo that looks similar to your shop icon instead of the one you have in the banner. I definitely think you'd keep the full shop name, but the polka dots and flags have a real logo feel instead of just the Arial text.

I'm a novice, so I may not be the best at advice, but this is just what I see off-the-bat. I think it's awesome that you have so many products though, that everything is well priced and how everything is so aesthetically pleasing!

Good luck! :)