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Need a Critique

hi, I opened my shop last month but since haven't have a sale, please tell me what is wrong
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Re: Need a Critique

Hola Jose Ana,
I just dropped by to make my own critique request but had a quick scan at yours ...
Firstly, who would be the first to buy a product ? people are cautious, they tend to follow others. why don't you get some a friend or 2 to buy something from you, genuinely ... you can do something for them in return.
You've put a grat deal of work choosing the context ..excellent ! the shop front looks great ...
Perhaps more images of the products out of context, i.e. sat on their own with natural wood/stone/sand background (most people need the opposite advce).
Finally, by offering 2 diverse products you are diluting the focus regarding SEO search meaning product placement ... consider specialising in one product range or open two shops.
If i'm looking for a hat, will I also be interested in religious icons ? (maybe).
remember, I am a novice here too, just my ideas .
Buena suerte amiga
Kevin Francis.
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Re: Need a Critique

Hey Jose,
I just noticed your critiques to other members ...

"loved your shop"

"super cute, love your shop"

C'mon Jose, be a little respectful of this group ...please give some proper reviews.
respectfully,
Kevin Francis



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chinashopvintage
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Hi Jose,
I love the photos of your beach accessories, they are beautifully taken.
I noticed that you have a very short "About" section. Maybe you should add more about yourself and your shop.
Also, you have two diverse products, I think you should focus on one or open a second shop.
Good Luck,
Vera
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