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I would LOVE some feedback and critiquing!:)

Hi everyone! I just joined this team, and I would really appreciate it if you took a look at my shop and gave me any advice or feedback that you can think of:)
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Re: I would LOVE some feedback and critiquing!:)

YOUR HEADER IS ADORABLE! LOVE IT! Your description might want to include the dimensions of your items. And pictures, maybe in natural light?
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Re: I would LOVE some feedback and critiquing!:)

I do like your header as well, but I think your shop name is way too small. It should be more noticeable.

I also think your photos need to be recropped so that the the majority of the item is centered in the thumbnail.

You might also think about using backgrounds that are less patterned. Your little keychains are very cute, but they compete with the pattern on the fabric behind them, whereas your coin purses are easily visible.

The Rose ring, on the other hand has enough contrast that it looks very nice and coordinates with it's background without getting lost.
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Re: I would LOVE some feedback and critiquing!:)

Overall it looks good - lots of variety and colors in what you are offering. The shop overall is interesting with a lot of fun stuff to look at. The things I could think of for potential improvements:

- Center the thumbnail picture; I'd like to see the top of some of those coin purses

- Some of the backgrounds are distracting (e.g. "Cute little hand stiched cat")

- Size of the coin purses would be good so I know if it'll fit in my tiny pocketbook.

Overall though it looked good.
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