Hi Ashley. I'll offer my 2 cents. :-) You have darling jewelry, but I can see where you might have trouble luring customers in. Let's look at this one for example:
http://www.etsy.com/listing/105810330/zebra-cheetah-hearts-earring-studs Your photos are so dark it's hard to tell from the thumbnail what you're selling. Brighten them up! Find a bright window, or make a little light box to reflect more light onto your items.
Get more exact description into your titles, and put what they are FIRST. "Zebra Cheetah hearts earring studs" is a good start, but you show four pairs of earrings. Are you selling a set of four? If so, write it in.
Stud Earrings: 4 pairs, Zebra Cheetah Hearts
Put much more description in the Description area. Something like "I made these earrings out of xxx. You'll be getting four pairs (or one pair) of the exact earrings shown (or I make them individually, but they'll be very similar to these).
If you are selling only one pair, put each type into its own listing. Consider each 20 cents you spend on a listing as an investment in opening a doorway for a customer to find you. The more items you have listed, the more doors you have.
I hope this helps. Best of luck to you!