Feedback on Listings

[dxpidesign]

Hi, I'm in the process of redoing my shop listings. My listing descriptions have a fair amount of text, so I've been trying to find some different ways to break up the text and call attention to the information. Unfortunately, without access to formatting options like bold or underline, I feel that my options are rather limited.

Here are some of the options I've come up with:
https://www.etsy.com/listing/99394114/
https://www.etsy.com/listing/75946351/
https://www.etsy.com/listing/77815489/
https://www.etsy.com/listing/78127381/

I'd really appreciate some feedback on these listings. Which one do you think looks the best? Which one is the easiest to read or to find the specific information a buyer might be looking for? Anyone have any good examples of how they've handled this issue?

Thanks!

[WhimseyDimples]

Just a quick look but I like the Animal Print - Zebra Leopard Tiger Giraffe
with the arrows pointing right at the section headings

[dxpidesign]

Thank you! I think the first glance impression is pretty valuable; that's generally all the time a listing has to make an impression. Thank you for the feedback.

[TheWorkingCrafter]

I agree that the animal print ones are the ones that stand out for me. Plus it draws my eye to the center information. I tend to lose the item in the center on the other two. I wish you well on your new listings!

[Former_Member]

I think you could move some of your terms of use to the policies area--everyone that buys a file gets those terms emailed to them, correct?

I agree with the others that the listings with the arrows at the front are easier to read. The arrow acts as a bullet point.

Good luck!

[dxpidesign]

Thanks for the feedback! It's good to know that the triangles seem to be working to separate the different blocks of information. I'll reevaluate the terms and see if some of the wording would be better in the policies section; that's a good thought.

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