I agree with the above.
I'd take your name out of the title... it just makes it look too busy. If people are looking for you, they'll search under "Shops", and that's not linked to item titles!
Let's take these as an example...
http://www.etsy.com/listing/85700409/tropical-sea-beads-mokume-gane-beads-byPeople are not going to search for "Tropical Sea" (although it IS fitting, and I can see why you used it).
Your target market for selling beads is people who will use them. Usually, they'll be looking for certain colours or shapes. A lot of beaders know what they want when they're looking online (personally I'm not one of them, I like to browse. But I would still search by colours).
I would title these more like: Blue, Green, Purple Swirl Handmade Coin Beads
The best tip I've heard for tagging items is this:
Imagine you're describing what you've made to a friend over the phone, who can't see the item/s. What words do you use? THESE are your tags!