Technical SEO question

[GetUpLifted]

Hi,
My shop is still new, but I am seeing increased views as I've worked on SEO.
In my listing titles I want them to read well for humans as well as for SEO.

I don't like reading titles of an items that are stuffed with 25 keywords that don't tell me much. I also want the item to have a name people can remember.
I had for my titles
Name of item - person quoted - printable/download/poster 81/2x11 or 8x10
for example :

Soar - Helen Keller quote - printable/download/poster 81/2x11 or 8x10

It occurred to me that it might be better to have the person quoted first.

Helen Keller quote - Soar - printable/instant download/poster designed for 81/2x11 or 8x10 frame

I added the "designed for" and the word "instant" again so that it reads well for the person who does come to the page.

I have made this change in the first three listings. Do you think this is a good idea? In the shop view now the person quoted shows.

[Former_Member]

I think it's a better idea to have the person's name first, but I'm new to Etsy. I'm a blogger and social media manager so from that standpoint, I'd say the person's name should go first.

[GetUpLifted]

Thanks for your response Taylor! :)