I too am super duper new so I am about to start taking new pictures of everything in my shop...again. I feel your pain.
The one thing I would give you is this:
If i were going to buy the one place I might wear it would be the pool or beach.
Right now looking at your pictures your model seems to be wearing panties...So that makes me think "oh this is a bedroom only sort of thing". Where should I be wearing my waist beads to a rave, the beach or the bedroom?
Then I clicked and read your description and that is awesome! You explained Everything to me!
But just looking for something to wear to the beach I might keep going on because of the sexy panties in the pic and never get to your description.
Your lighting and background is great too!
Also I like that you used a mannequin... makes me feel like I'm not looking at a stranger's "business" while shopping- if that makes sense.