Question About Increasing My Customer Base For My Etsy Shop

[MichaelLovesPhysics]

To Whom It May Concern,

My name is Michael, and as I said before, I have been an Etsy Seller since October 2017.  Also as I said before, my Etsy shop name is PhabrisaurShop, and I sell pencil topper erasers, sculptures, nature photos, and necklaces.

I have had trouble with increasing my customer base lately, and I am writing in reference to a question that I have about an idea that I have that could possibly help me to increase my customer base.

Do you have any suggestions for any persuasive language that I could use in the titles of my listings and my listing descriptions, that could possibly convince people to purchase my items?  Could you let me know, please?

As I said before, you can find my Etsy shop by typing PhabrisaurShop into the search engine at the top of the home page on Etsy.

Thanks for your consideration, and I look forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely,

Michael

PhabrisaurShop

[CleverClayShop]

Make your descriptions longer and maybe lead with what they are - pencil topper cute red animal, child gift, animal eraser.

What you are listing in the title are the search elements that your customer would be using to find your item that is for sale.  

Are you using all 13 tags and all ten photos when you make your listing?  if not, do that.