New and would like some help

[nevenajelic]

Hi everyone! My name is Nevena and I am an Italian dressmaker. I am new to Etsy and I am struggling to get noticed. Please share with me your feedbacks on how I can improve my shop and my listings! Thank you a lot!!!

www.etsy.com/shop/AgoArtistico

[CassteenIronworks]

Hi Novena, I'm new to etsy as well. Your outfits are amazing. I look forward to seeing your new creations. The one thing that I would change is your titles for each outfit. The key words should be separated by commas, this should help customers to find your store much easier.
If you could take a look at my shop, CassteenIronworks, and give me feedback I would greatly appreciate it. Good luck.

[Former_Member]

Hello! My name is Josh and I'm very new also. I am also looking for some help. Any suggestions you might have please let me know. I look forward to joining any discussion and offering my help as well to the team!

[Former_Member]

www.etsy.com/shop/jjstevensdesigns

[Former_Member]

Josh how did you get your etsy web page on this link? I can't seem to find mine to cut and paste. Are you on iPhone app or PC ?

[Former_Member]

I also can't seem to open the above shops with posted links. Am I viewing them correctly.

[CassteenIronworks]

Josh
I like your bracelets, the one thing that I would change is your titles. The first part of your title should be what the item is. The rest of the title should be separated by commas. You can use single words and or 2 to 3 word phrases such as: gift for him, lava beads, bracelet for him, gift for guy, etc. Your key words should match your title making your listings that much easier to find.
I have to do this to my listings as well. The ones that I did it for seem to pop up on the 1st to 2nd page.
If you could take a look at my shop CassteenIronworks and critique I would appreciate it.

[Former_Member]

My name is Landry and I recently started beading two months ago. My interest brewed first when I was young, tumbling gemstones in a small toy tumbling machine and I always loved gemstones and when I found a reputable supplier, it only made sense to incorporate something I found interesting when I was younger to revive my infatuation with it. Can someone help with improving my shop and to get more views to my shop?

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