Shop Critique

[Former_Member]

Hi All,

Lately my sales have massively slowed down. And was wondering if it was just my shop. I'd love to hear your input on my photos, items, prices, etc.

Please help!

Thanks,
Grace

[daintylikeafox]

Hey helloagainvintage! I have to say your shop looks great! Your photos are wonderful and I think your prices are more than reasonable. If I had to change one think, I think it'd be your descriptions. While you've included all of the essential information, they still seem a bit lacking. It's always nice when the descriptions have a little bit of personality to them. It doesn't have to be anything long, just a few sentences, but I think that might really make your shop amazing!!

[IslandGirlPottery]

Looking good! Have your tried promoting off etsy? facebook fan page, twitter etc.?

[IslandGirlPottery]

Your shop announcement should be packed full of keywords. I would put a bunch of keywords in your 1st line.

[Former_Member]

Hi - Your photos are great and really showcase your items well! Do you relist an item or two daily or 2-3 times a week? I think your prices also are reasonable, so I aggree with Dainty in that some of your descriptions need to be a little padded. Good luck!!

[Former_Member]

Hi, me again - I was browsing your profile and another suggestion would be to get into creating treasuries periodically - I always try to return the favor after being featured in a treasury, so that would be an excellent avenue in getting your items seen by more people!! Its a great way to "payitforward" so to speak!
Another thought would be to join another team or two? Just another way to get your items posted and seen by other people! The teams I am in are really great at making me post my items regularly and at encouraging treasuries!! Just a couple more thoughts!

[Former_Member]

Thanks for all your suggestions!

I'm going to work on my descriptions as well as create more treasuries. :)

I already do loads of advertising on facebook, twitter, and off & on through blogging, however, I've probably lacked using keywords properly. :/

Thanks again,
Grace