I need some critiques please

[Former_Member]

it seem like my sales has been stopped for a while
can you please criticize my shop so i might have an idea what happened?

[Former_Member]

anyone?

[Former_Member]

Your jewelry is so beautiful! I love all of the crochted pieces! I really like the photos that you have using the model...they really help to show off the beauty of the jewelry. On some of your listings (for ex...the crocheted leaf neckalce...the first picture you have is the one of you wearing it. I would switch pictures to have the close up shot first.. When people are looking through tons of jewelry listings, the first picture has to be the one to grab them, and I love the second and third photos on the leaf pendant...they really show off the details! Some of the listings didn't have these close up shots, and I think might help to have these! Hope I helped. Your work is beautiful, I haven't seen anything like it on etsy. I am sure your sales will pick up soon! Good luck! :)

[Former_Member]

Well, this is weird! You were featured on my blog this past week as one of my Etsy Favourites:

http://venusenvyart.blogspot.com/2011/05/etsy-favourites-of-week-give-to-me-your.html

I didn't realize you had another shop. If you'd like I can add that bit of info in the blog post, maybe it will get you some attention, because I can't see any reason why you wouldn't--your work is incredible. Mind you, I can't promise that you'll get an influx of buyers--I have exactly 8 blog followers, lol. But I will add the other shop name to the post so that people can follow the link, if that helps. :)

[Former_Member]

there, done--I've added this shop to the post and said a little something about it. Hope it helps some! :)
Jenny