critique my youtube videos? also some questions.

[Former_Member]

http://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLU3xp78-YHhw_LaDgtd0MJl9diuerk5Ek&feature=c4-feed-u

i've got up 3 videos currently of me doing the process of painting my products in photoshop. i was wondering if i could get some feedback, for example, would you rather have commentary or music? also, how can i add a final 5 second shot of the final piece at the end? thanks!

[MrClumsys]

Hi! I think you should explain the process and put some nice background music.

[Former_Member]

I like your work.

I agree with Clumsy.

Also you might want to mention a couple of examples how your art work can benefit your viewers to increase sales.

I'm not sure exactly what you sell or how to buy it.

I think you should speed up the video more unless you are making a tutorial.

I hope that helps.