I'm trying to make my packaging a bit more geeky. Does anyone have any suggestions to improve the following description of my packaging method?
ALL PACKAGES COME WITH:
~a printed invoice
~a thank you note
~a comic book envelope containing a business card, coupon, pin-back button, and thank you card
ALL JEWELRY COMES PACKAGED IN:
~a bag (organza or resealable plastic)
~kraft box stamped with my mustache labeled jar logo, containing a business card
~optional kraft wrapping paper or comic book pages
~baker's twine wrapped around the box and tied into a bow with a "Made With Love" stamped white cardstock speech bubble tag embellishment
~a bubble wrap mailing envelope decorated in washi tape and/or deco tape
Any ideas? Comments? Suggestions? Thank you!