should i change my tags on this item?

[cindyjjang]

i created this notebook and I was so excited to list this in my shop if people like it..
but OMG.. the view is ZERO. (I listed it 20hrs ago)
Nobody come to see this notebook yet. I was searching this notebook thry Etsy search but it didn't even come up. (I typed my tag words but it didn't come up)
Did I use too common tag words?
Could you help me to change the tags?

https://www.etsy.com/listing/150687855/vintage-french-inspired-paris-handmade?ref=shop_home_active

[AttentionGetting]

I'd try changing the title:

Notebook Journal Diary with Vintage Paris Theme

[cindyjjang]

Hello G.B.Oliver,
Thanks for your advice.
Do you think my title is too long?
Do you think the tags are fine?