help meeeeeee.......... please!

[bottegadicartone]

Hi,
I opened the shop in 2013 with the jewelery I took care of him but not much, in the meantime I changed my article, I sell products made with recycled cardboard. E 'from October 2014 that I follow most of my small shop, but I can not sell.
I did marathons of hearts, but nothing.
I do not know how to know my work, I can not understand where wrong.
Do you have any advice for me?
You understand what I sell?
A deadline will remove all products from jewelery to leave only works cardboard


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[Paintspiration]

Ciao Virna!

Your message is very difficult to understand; it seems like the translator you are using is not very clear. I noticed the same in your item descriptions. Maybe you could find someone who writes well in English who can help you translate? Or is it being translated from Italian by my browser? I also recommend entering sizes in pounds/ounces and inches as well, because many buyers from the US will understand those measurements easier. Your photos are really well done! And your international shipping prices are extremely fair.

[nad205]

Virna!! I will only tell you from my experience and there is a lot to do with your shop but first you start with the abc
Who is your target market as your shop has a bit of everything so really it is not clear
Stick with an idea that combines well your craft eg cardboard frames or carboard toys and carboard jewelry etc etc
Try to make your shop attractive to a buyer so he or she stays a bit longer eg offer them choice like color designs shapes etc etc
You need more items so there will be more choices
When you get these above then it is time for SEO/ Tags/ heading
I am also always learning how to better run my shop and really it needs a lot of work
I wish you luck

[bottegadicartone]

grazie , grazie , grazie!!!!
Siete molto gentili, il mio grande problema è l'inglese.
Cercherò di tradurre meglio,
toglierò la bigiotteria presto e per avere solo prodotti di cartone.
Originali, non si trovano sul mercato, ma ancora non riesco ad emergere, a farmi conoscere.

Etsy è affascinante, stimolante, straordinariamente ricco, sono fiera di stare qua, spero di poter emergere.

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Thank you , thank you , thank you!
Was very kind of you, my big problem is the english.
I will try to translate better flesh
the jewelry as soon as possible and to have only board products.
Originals, are not to be found on the market, but still i can't stand out, to let me know.

Etsy is fascinating, stimulating, extraordinarily rich, I am proud to stay here, I hope to be able to emerge.

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