Good morning neighbor - I go to Clarkston all the time! Your items are great, but the pictures need some work. They are too dark (also your banner) and could use some brightening. Do you have any photo editing software? Does your camera allow for a white balance? It looks like you've tried to make a light box, but using fabric? I would suggest buying some white foam core board and use that instead, because it's hard to be wrinkle free with the fabric.
Also, your titles and tags could use a little work. In the item I am looking at - "Fused glass rabbit suncatcher is hoping his way to your house" - you need to title it a little differently. Remember that the title needs to help you get found in Search. So, maybe a better title would be - Fused Glass Suncatcher, Window Decor, Animal Lover Art, Glass Art, Fused Glass Ornament, Rabbit Lover Gift, Hanging Suncatcher, etc..... I'm no expert, but I do know that your titles needs to have highly relevant "tags" in it and then your tags have to have those same phrases repeated and then some. This was hard for me at first because I thought a title was an actual title, not just a string of words, but to be found, it needs to be a string of phrases that will help you get found in Search. I just came across this "article" and maybe it can help you -
http://orangetwig.com/blog/etsy-seo-get-found-in-etsy-search?ref=sGood Luck!