Your pictures are wonderful.
And I love this:
http://www.etsy.com/listing/87642699/steampunk-vintage-elgin-pocket-watchThe trouble, from my perspective, is that I can't tell from the description what exactly that item that I love IS. Is it truly a working pocket watch? (If it is one, I'd like to see the clock face in the photos.) It says it's from the 1900s, which is awesome, but I want to know more -- where was it made? Or is it a replica or reproduction? Did it look like this when you got it, or did you make it yourself (I can't tell)?
This also means that I have no idea whether your price is a steal (as it seems to be?) or more than I'd like to pay for the object. Since I can't tell, I don't buy.
In other words, I would say work on your descriptions next -- and don't just clarify what the objects are that you're selling, but tell a story with your descriptions. I read an article recently (maybe we all did -- I'm going through Etsy archives and can't tell what I've read that's recent and what's "classic"!) that really clarified this for me: your descriptions are helping your buyer to imagine herself as the person she wants to be, and telling her how your item helps her become that person.
That's a lot of swagger for any product or object, and I'm not saying any of us are selling anything life-changing here, but we ARE part of the handmade movement, and that is something -- and the items we make with our hard work, or pick out from history to repurpose and use now, those are significant because of what we put into them. And because of the stories they tell -- oftentimes the stories they tell about US, not about how practical or pretty the object is...though the descriptions should be clear on that, too.
I'm a bit of a writer, and my descriptions tend to be pretty long (because I have fun writing them), so I'm probably biased in this area. But that's where I'd spend the next portion of time you have ready for Etsying, because your photos really are gorgeous, and I think you should be getting a lot more sales.