critique please?

[Former_Member]

i know that my pictures need some work and i'm currently researching tips on that, but other than that, any advice you can give me is appreciated! xox

[Former_Member]

What type of yarn did you use? Some people have wool allergies and people need to know in case they have allergies.

You need a banner!

Also, try to fill out some more about each item-romance them to your customer!

Good luck

[Former_Member]

Add additional photos! You have five to use- so try to use all of them up! And try to add a listing a day. It really keeps your shop relevant in regards to SEO.
Best,
Kelly

[StuckOnSilver]

Congratulations on your new shop!! And sale!!

http://www.etsy.com/listing/120398385/womens-white-crochet-headband-with-white

The first three words of your title allow your items to get found. Good luck!

[Former_Member]

It tends to bother me when a listing states something that it really isn't. For example: http://www.etsy.com/listing/121108457/crochet-small-skinny-travel-carrying?
Could this really be an iPad cover? From just looking at it, I'm not sure my iPhone would fit. It would be nice to have a picture of a phone in the case to show that it really does fit.

[Former_Member]

Hi Jennifer,

Lovely start to your shop :-) Beautiful work. But how long does it take you to make each item? If you had an hourly wage for your time, what are you earning, maybe two dollars an hour at best? I think you need to charge your worth (says the woman who still puts up wholesale prices... I'm working on it, lol)

Maybe more items? And things like the iPad cover, have a photo of it in use?

Would love a critique myself if you have a chance!

Best of luck,
Holly