You quit when either when you no longer enjoy what you are doing or when you can no longer financially afford to stay open.
But if I were you I would look seriously at your titles for a moment. If you were to walk into a B&M shop would you ask for
""Pink Retro Earrings kitsch Mint Bow Earrings Pink Vintage Repurposed Dangle Earrings Kawaii Retro Jewelry Pink Jewelry Repurposed Jewelry""
You have repeated the word 'pink' three times, earrings 3 times, jewelry twice.
Based on the title my best guess of what it is that you are selling is a pair of pink mint bow dangle earrings made from another piece of jewellery.
This is the piece that I'm referring to
https://www.etsy.com/listing/202326651/pink-retro-earrings-kitsch-mint-bowI would suggest that you tidy up your titles and tags so that they actually describe what you are selling.
And I'm not sure what you mean in the description when you say
""Gift For her, Bridal Jewelry, Retro Jewellery, Vintage Jewellery, Polymer Clay Jewelry, Vintage Jewelry
Vintage Repurposed, Vintage Necklace, Vintage Earrings, Artisan Perfume OIl, Fragrance oil, Solid Perfume, Solid Fragrance, Vintage Bracelet, Statement Necklace Kawaii, Kawaii Jewelry, Kawaii Jewellery Sweetystuff, BrambleBerryandRose, Retro Jewelry Christmas"""
It really doesn't make much sense.
What you may want to do instead is tell some of the backstory about how what your inspiration was