Hi Noelle, I took a look at your shop, cute things!
I am a fairly new shop owner, but have had some good advice from others on Etsy, so a few things about your shop I noticed:
1. Some of your pictures are a bit blurry. I love the backgrounds and the style of your pictures is consistent throughout your shop, but a few clearer photos of your earrings and keychains especially might make a difference. it is hard to make out some of the details. Maybe a light box with white background would help your items really "pop"?
2. Some of the wording is a bit difficult to decipher for me. I must say, I do think excellent English grammar throughout your shop descriptions and announcements would really go a long way towards inspiring confidence in your buyers : )
3. I feel like your pricing is good for your products, how about adding a bit more stock? This often helps. The more the better, they always say! New items get your listings more noticed.
4. Have you tried the Etsy search ads? I have had some good results with these.
Best of luck to you, we are truly all in this together. Hopefulyy your sales start to really pick up soon!