I like the second pictures, def more appealing! If I wanted to buy I'd go with no. 2, I think a lighter background (not necessarily white) on the second pic would also make the colors and pattern stand out more :)
Thank you Glendy, I'm working on a new background so white backgrounds are to come. The Monsters inc one I'm thinking of keeping like that because of the pattern of the fabric
Personally, I find the left part of the first shot a good example to show your crayons. You can take a shot of the same pose to be used as the main picture for your item. Use the remaining 4 more picture preview with different angles to show crayon holder design.