What do you think of my "new" shop and items?

[Former_Member]

I would love some constructive feedback now I have re-opened with brand new work.

So far I have listed a handful of ACEOs but there are more prints to come, shall be listing more throughout the week so hopefully I can stay at the top of searches :)

http://www.etsy.com/shop/JayHell

[Plektra]

Hi Jen, I had a look and I noticed a couple of things...

I think the background of your photos is interesting but I find it a bit distracting as your products are colorful.

I would add a bit more to the profile info....

I randomly clicked on a couple of listings and I noticed that some of your tags are only one word. It is advisable to use phrases instead of just words as you'll have more chances to come up in searches.

I hope that helps a bit!

[Former_Member]

Hi Jen!

I agree with the background feedback - I like the concept but it feels "busy".

I think your explanation of your work is really great and complete but may be a lot for a buyer to read through - ? Maybe it could be pared down a bit so that there isn't as much text to deal with, and obviously you could provide more info on request. Personally I love the info and love reading about technique, but just not sure that the average buyer wouldn't be overwhelmed...

Good luck! :)

[Former_Member]

Thanks guys, that's really helpful! The things you have mentioned are the same things I was unsure about so that's good-will have a bit of an editing session this evening :)

[TheGluckDesign]

What do you think of my shop??
http://www.etsy.com/shop/GyGante?ref=si_shop