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Use your senses to write better titles, tags and descriptions

As online sellers, we are limited to one sense – our sense of sight – for giving buyers a complete five-senses sensory experience. When buyers are browsing online, they cannot feel, smell, taste, or hold an item in their hands to turn it over and look at it from all angles. So it is up to us, the sellers, to create that experience for them using two devices: photographs and item descriptions.

A couple of years ago, I conducted a sensory awareness experiment, where I focused each day on one of my five senses and journaled about what I experienced. In trying to capture my experience with words, I realized that your senses are EXCELLENT tools for coming up with creative and descriptive titles, tags, and descriptions for the items in your shop.

So how do you use your senses?  Well, give it a try right now.  Grab one of your shop items and hold it in your hands.  Look at it from different angles.  What does it remind you of?  Feel it.  Rub your fingers over it.  If it is jewelry, put it on (if this is hygienic for the particular piece) and feel how it wears on your body.  Is it heavy, light, smooth, textured?  If it is something that you eat or drink, taste it.  If it is not something that you eat, imagine what it would taste like if it were edible.  How would it smell if it had a scent?

Take notes while you do this, and be adventurous!  Grab a thesaurus and use any or all of these as guides:

1) What are the first three words that come to mind when you see your item?

2) What does it look like? Use colors, shapes, familiar scenes or objects.

3) How big is it?  Use references as well as measurements; For example, “about the size of a nickel” (***This is a perfect place to use up one of your photo slots as well! Not all of us can visualize measurements through a numerical measurement - I want to see a photographic reference if possible)

4) What does it feel like? Think textures, temperatures, how it would feel in your hands, on your skin

5) If it were a smell, what would it be?

6) If it were a taste, what would it be?

7) What kind of sound would it make?

Now take your notes and pull out the key descriptors - words you think really POW ZING! - and think about whether they would be good key words to accurately describe your item. If so, consider using some of those *sparkle words* (as my son's first grade teacher calls them) in your titles and tags. And remember, the Etsy search function searches tags and titles (not descriptions), so your tags and titles are precious real estate. Use them wisely and try to avoid redundancy. If you use the word "green" in your title, you do not need to repeat it in your tags - use that space for a different word, even if it's just a different word for green (emerald, lime, grass, chartreuse).

Have fun! (If you need a little jump start in finding words for your sensory experience, I've got a couple of entries on my blog from my experiment. Here's the first - "A Day in Sounds" - http://www.blog.sacredsuds.com/?p=52)
xo,
Andrea
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This article make me rethink using five-senses sensory for description! I definitely will try them.
Thanks for sharing such a great and helpful advice!
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Great advice! Sometimes I struggle to come up with interesting titles and my descriptions are pretty factual rather than creative!
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This is excellent. Book marked for occasional reminder. Thanks for sharing
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Yes! thanks for sharing. My work is drawings and paintings- 2D stuff. This helps bring it alive.
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Thanks for sharing, this is great!!!
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Great article! thanks for sharing.
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I'm so glad you all found it helpful!
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Thanks! I'll be putting this in my brain bank, I always get stumped on what to write for descriptions past factual techniques and care instructions.
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I love your thoughtful posts!

Great ideas. Keep up your wonderful work!
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Nice post girl! Thank you for the tips!
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such great tips! Thanks so much.
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sacredsuds: Can you post one of your items here that follows your advice, to give us an example?

As a former writing teacher, I love your idea. I used to make my students go through this exercise with a Hershey's Kiss. They had to write about how it looked, smelled, felt, sounded like (when unwrapping) and finally, tasting!
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so glad i found this group! i never thought about the smell of items. when people come into my home, they always tell me they love the smell of my wood items and the smell of the stains ~ referring it to the primitive, vintage smell as fresh baked apples (not sure i get that but ok) and i started adding a cinnamon stick also to my items so when they open it, they get a fresh smell of something that is very primitive. thanks for the great ideas!
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@DecoratingYourself - AWESOME check list!!! Thanks so much for posting that - everyone should definitely check it out!

@WormeWoole - yes! This started out as a writing exercise for me, and it was fantastic for developing descriptive and creative writing skills. As far as listings go, here is an example from my shop:
http://www.etsy.com/listing/61851977/earth-element-of-prosperity-strength-and
If you look at the tags, you will see some of the descriptive keywords that help describe the image in the photograph (including props), the essence of the soap, and who it smells like it would be good for (men and unisex, virgo taurus).

@tinkerscottage oh, you should absolutely include the smell of your wood items! I think the scent of wood is one of the best smells on Earth, especially compared to the sickening chemically smell of particle board. I think that would be a great selling point, and I love the idea of the cinnamon stick in your packages.
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Thanks for the example!

Here's one of my listings that uses word association...but I plan to add more sensory descriptions to this and other listings.

http://www.etsy.com/listing/70795221/patchwork-felted-sweater-wool-scarf
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@WormeWoole LOVE the first sentence of your item description! I think you could even use some of those descriptions of gray/grey in your tags, for sure - especially steel or slate color. I think the only other thing I would want to see as a buyer is what does it feel like? Does it feel like felt? Or like a kitten's fur? Does it breathe? Is it scratchy? Thanks for sharing - awesome scarf!
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Thanks for the interesting article! What I want to know, is did your tag changes make a difference?
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Love this thread! Fantastic tips, I've learned so much form it, thank you for sharing.I'm adding more items to my shop this coming week and defiantly need to work on descriptions.
@WormeWoole- yes, great description for a scarf ( gray is my fave as well :)
sacredsuds- i totally can smell you gougers soaps from your description !
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sacredsuds

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@Petalknits - Yes, I think changing tags will definitely help make your shop more visible on Etsy searches. Personally, I am continually updating my tags according to the seasons, fresh ideas I might have, and the merchandising desk trends (see below for link), and I would say yes, it helps a lot.

http://www.etsy.com/storque/seller-handbook/from-etsys-merchandising-desk-may-planning-12555/

However, I hesitate to say that just changing up tags will make or break a shop. In my case, my shop has definitely been growing lately, but I can't attribute the growth to just tags - in conjunction with changing up tags, I also continually work to improve my photos, am an avid treasury curator, am active on a couple of different Etsy teams, and I hang out on Twitter. I think all of those things together have contributed to growth in my shop, but even if I didn't have time for all the other parts, I think the tags and titles are vital foundations to build your shop on. Hope that helps!

xo,
Andrea
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@stitchinnetka awww, thank you!!! I found that smell is one of the hardest senses for me to describe - I'm so glad it worked for you :-)
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Yes, thanks!
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This is awesome!! its so hard sometimes to think of creative things to say about an item, but this seems to be a great idea! thanks for the tip!
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