Taking a new path - critique please

[worldofpineapple]

Hello everyone,

So far I've been selling printed leather finished products in my shop (like belts, phone cases...).
I recently started offering printed leather pieces for sale - as a material for artists and crafters for making their own designs.

This is a something new for me and I would love to hear some critique and opinions -
Do you think the descriptions are clear?
Is there anything important I forgot to mention?

This is the direct link to the section in my store:
http://www.etsy.com/shop/worldofpineapple?section_id=11266506

Thank you very much!

Noa

[ShiShiSupplies]

Hello Noa,

Congratulations and good luck on your new path.. I think it was a good idea to put supplies since supplies tend to make more business, at least that is what i realized so far. I am selling finished jewerly and supplies...

I also ask ppl for their opinion about my shop and they said they liked how I separated the finished jewelry and the supplies, perhaps you can do the same.

I also recomment on your photos, instead of puttion same close shot of the design, you may fold the product in a nice way and shot a photo that way.. perhaps use a background either white or something that will not counteract the product. White works much better just like your finished products.

I love the variety of your leather pieces btw.. :))

Good luck..
Seniz

Your description seem pretty good to me.. informative..

[worldofpineapple]

Thank you Seniz :)
I had a feeling my photos might have something missing...
I will think of a new way to photograph.
Thanks!

[Former_Member]

I think your printed leather listings look good. One thing I did catch. You say to care for the leather by wiping it with a "dump" cloth. I'm thinking you mean to say damp, unless a dump cloth is some leather-worker's phrase I'm not familiar with.

[worldofpineapple]

You're right Amie, my mistake!... Thanks for this!