I suggest following the usual suggestions to improve your listings: focus on titles, tags, and photos. When Etsy suggested using Black Friday Etsy and Cyber Monday Etsy tags, it also recommended not using them in titles.
Next, tighten up your descriptions. This listing, for example, is very difficult to follow.
http://www.etsy.com/listing/114501777/cybermonday-sale-beaded-braceletCorrect the grammar and spelling errors. Use links to other items you have for sale rather than just mentioning them. I'm confused by your shipping policy - you say, "Free shipping when purchased with another product," but your shipping prices are telling me something else entirely.
What sizes are your items? Include metric and imperial measurements. Use all five of your photos, including some of your pieces being worn, if possible.