Shop critique

[Former_Member]

I would appreciate some help to critique my shop. My shop stats are really high but haven't had any sales lately. Am I expecting too much? How do I need to improve my shop? Work on tags? Increase amount of listings? Any constructive cricism will be appreciated.

[LeedsRadio]

I'm not in love with your photos. The color seems off.

Your descriptions need work because they seem misleading in combination item(s) shown in the photos

https://www.etsy.com/listing/206770344/dollhouse-miniature-bedding-pillows

When I first look at this I thought it was for the bed and the bedding. The confusion is multiplied by description that starts this way, with no punctuation:

"Dollhouse Miniature Bedding with Pillows Bedskirt Bedspread Set Scale One Inch"

Multiple places when a common noun is capitalized. Redundant wording:

"Elegant Beige Bedding Set for your dollhouse miniature bed....
Fabric is a very nice brocade in light beige"

You misspelled "embroidered."

There are others

[Former_Member]

OH.. I love your shop! Vintage love!!!!

I would suggest making you photos better... You wanting people to want your items that they can't live without so you really want to make your products look as beautiful as possible!!!

xoxo
-Jemima

[Former_Member]

Great items, but I agree with the above posters that the pictures are very important to sales. I suggest not using camera flash and taking photos in bright, natural light (I even go outside to get enough light but NOT in direct sunlight). Then, you can brighten photos in many kinds of programs like photoshop or picasa. Bright pictures really appeal to people. I also try to use similar backdrops and backgrounds for all my items to create a cohesive look and build my shop's brand. Good luck!

[Former_Member]

Thanks, I'm going to redo a lot and will start working on what has been suggested. I think taking photos is my least favorite part of this. I just started using PicMonkey and think my photos have gotten better with it. I appreciate the help so much.