Hi Rhina
This is my second shop here on Etsy (I also sell crochet items) and I'm just getting it off the ground. Firstly your shop banner image is gorgeous and very striking I love the colour. I remember a year or so ago starting my first shop the things that really helped me were, listing more items (I'm behind on this one in this shop 😬 Lol) second was SEO I signed up for etsyrank (its free and a great tool) and gives you tips on improving your listings to make them more visible, things like ensuring your tags are in the description and gives you keyword ideas. Lastly be patient it takes time and dedication to build a great shop.
Your work is lovely and your images are great (maybe try some on a blank background ) and I love your shop updates.
Keep at it Etsy is a great place to be. ☺️ Hope this helps