Shop Critique??

[Former_Member]

ANyone be willing to critique my shop?!? Id love to hear input on prices, pictures, items...everything :)

Thanks

[NightShiftVintage]

WOW!...beautiful items!...but the one thing I think I would do differently, is maybe make two seperate shops...the crocheted items are so beautiful but completely different from your gorgeous photos. I think you will have a stronger fan base for your passions if the two could be specialized in their own "spotlight"...just a thought :)

[Former_Member]

I think it's a very cute shop. I have to disagree on the two shop idea though. I agree that the two mediums are very different but the people who come to the shop to see the crocheted stuff might also like the paintings which they wouldn't see if they were in a separate shop and vice versa.

[NightShiftVintage]

Ravy17...you have a point!

[Former_Member]

yeah ravy thats what we were going for in adding such different items :)

[Former_Member]

Hi thisandthat! I think your description of the stuffed owl would be more effective if you said something like, "He's a one-of-a-kind, so scoop him up today!" Right now your description makes him sound less special than he is. Also, I'd make sure you give dimensions on all your items (I only see them on a few now) and state the materials right in your description. Newcomers to Etsy might not know to read the materials at the bottom next to your tags. Good luck!

[Former_Member]

thanks, i will definately work on that