Shop Critique

[RainbowBeeDesign]

I have recently changed the direction of my shop. I am taking this as a serious endeavor and I would really appreciate if anyone would critique my shop.

I have made lots of changes in the last few weeks and I have noticed a drastic change for the better in views. I have also made a couple of sales this month so far...I am beyond excited!

I am always looking to improve and would love to get some feedback!
Wishing you all the best! and thank you in advance for any feedback!

Cheers!
Josee

[StuckOnSilver]

https://www.etsy.com/listing/279788750/paris-print-waxed-canvas-lunch-bag-with?ref=shop_home_active_...

HI, Josee--love your work! I looked at this amazing listing. The first three words of your title should reflect what the item is. Maybe you could begin your title with "Paris canvas lunchbag, ..." or something similar. Then replicate the phrases in your title in your tags and in your description.

The dimensions of this back are not clear. In one place your mention one dimension and in another place your mention another dimension for this same bag.

All the best!

[RainbowBeeDesign]

Perfect! Thank You! I will correct those! I'm so grateful!

Cheers!
Josee