Shop Critique

[Former_Member]

Hello dear members !

Can you have a look at my shop and write a critique/opinion about it.
May be I did something wrong, or forgot to add something...

I would like to get a fresh look about my shop from like minded people, like you members)

Please, be honest :)
Thanks in advance for your time and critique!

[helgahutchens]

Hello Anna,
I wish I could give you constructive criticism, but I have a lot to learn about SEO and keywords myself. I do know that I love your work! It is delightful! Your photography is great, your layouts are just right.
Someone else could probably give you some links to help you improve the other stuff, although from my point of view, you are doing pretty well with that, too. Your shop has not been open all that long, it takes time to establish a business. In the meantime, maybe you could add some more of your work. Personally I'd like to see more of your nursery art. Maybe even something of a birth announcement, baby's first birthday. Maybe you could even personalize them for a higher price, people love that.
Best wishes for lots of inspiration

[Former_Member]

Hello Anna

Hope you find this feedback useful, I will only point out the shortcomings here and leave the good part aside for now.

1) The "About Shop" on the top below the Pink Pather Arts panel is very generic and does not carry much info about the shop and the idea behind it or the vision of it. I think you could spend some time on defining that part more precisely.
2) No. of products are just 15 which is less. You need to have more products.
3) Different categories needed. Your shop just has one category "Prints". Categorising paintings under various categories like "Nature Prints" "For Office" "Livingroom" "Tabletop" etc will help clients decide what they want. And direct them to the category that suits their purpose.
4) Each print should carry a small writeup about the print. The idea behind it. For eg. in this one

https://www.etsy.com/in-en/listing/264531503/baby-on-the-moon-nursery-decor-nursery?ref=shop_home_ac...

"A painting for the baby's room. This was concieved when a friend of mine had a baby and wanted something to put on her room."

This is just an example, but this will create a little more involvement of the prospective buyer.

My View.

All the best and happy etsying.

Harmeet Kaur

[Former_Member]

Elke Helga and Harmeet, thank you so much for the feedback.
I will definitely use yours suggestions.

Thanks a lot !

[MariasWorkshop]

Hi Anna,

I love your shop, your art is colorful and very attractive. I also like the way your shop looks.

I agree with the opinions you received above. I only have a couple of suggestions.

In your “Shipping” section, you wrote:

“Please note, I “can not” guarantee the exact delivery time because “It” depends on the Post Office and Postman.”

I believe the word should be “cannot guarantee” and the word “it” should not be capitalized.

“Refunds and Exchanges” – I would suggest “Returns, Refunds and Exchanges”

In addition, it would be a good idea to indicate the time frame in which a customer can return the item to you. Some shops allow 14 days from the date of receipt of the item, some others allow more. You can check other shops’ policies to get an idea.

In the following paragraph of your policies, you do not specify whether the customer has to return the item to you.

“While I believe you will be very happy with your purchase, if you are unhappy with the item for any reason I will return your money in full amount.”

I am not a native English speaker, so I will not address the grammar (which I think is very good, by the way), but I noticed a couple of “typos” in your Descriptions, as follows:

“My prints are hight (should be “high”) quality and professionally printed on a heavy weight, archival, acid free textured paper.”

“Colors and paper you see on your monitor may different slightly (should be “may differ slightly”, or “may be slightly different”) from the actual colors of the print.”

I wish you the best of luck. Your shop is lovely.

[StuckOnSilver]

Beautiful work, Anna! Be sure to indicate that digital purchases are for personal use only, not for resale.
All the best,
Bev

[Former_Member]

Beautiful shop, Anna! I love your work, I find it very unique!
My suggestions:
- in the first lines describe every item in greater detail, like: flying elephant with pink balloon and birds, also include the quotes and what inspired you,
- I would use "birthday gift", "baby shower gift" etc...
-Try to create treasury lists
-post on twitter, Instagram and Pinterest
Your work is really lovely! I envy the photos! :)
Hope it helps!