Requesting Title Critique!

[PixieHearts]

Hi,

Please give me critiques on my item titles. My goal is to make my items more relevant in search. I look for my items via Etsy and I end up around the 10th page while the same people have tons of their listings constantly show up on the front pages. I know there are many factors behind this such as re-listing, but I also know there's a way to phrase your titles, I just can't figure out what!

Please look at my jewelry shop: https://www.etsy.com/shop/PixieHearts?ref=si_shop
And my pet tags shop as well: https://www.etsy.com/shop/Pixsqueaks?ref=si_shop

Thank you guys!
~ Katrina

[MoonthrallTarot]

Hi Katrina,
Cute shop!
https://www.etsy.com/listing/186685759/day-of-the-dead-earrings-halloween?ref=shop_home_active_9

Ehhh, I don't see anything wrong with your titles. I looked up a couple keywords and you were on the first page. These were specific to items in your shop, like candy skull earrings. Besides being on the first page, your listing really stood out.

I've learned titles to start with a simple few words on what it actually is.
Candy Skull Earrings for example. Then, I've seen people posting their success with adding more groups of keywords after. Ex ....Stud Earrings. Clay Earrings. for x, y, z holiday.

Just have time for the first shop. I know it's not much information. Just wanted pass along what I know and say your shop is awesome!
Much success!
Svet