Hi Melena!
Just in general for critiques I would say have banner redone (I hope this doesn't sound mean, but it looks a little homegrown to me and could be updates/spiffed up) and also, very important, VARY YOUR TITLES, they all start with "Vinyl Record" and you could be starting some with "home decor" or "rocker" or "music" or "centerpiece" or "platter" or "bowl" or "fruit bowl" or "nut bowl" or "coffee table bowl" or a bazillion other keywords! :)
Here is more info about that:
I also highly recommend the SEO (Search Engine Optimization) guidance:
www.etsy.com/storque/search/tags/search-engine-optimization/
And here are more tips on relevancy (coming up high in etsy searches):
http://www.etsy.com/blog/en/2012/the-seller-handbook/#getfoundHope that helps!
Celeste (Crickets)