love the bottle holder ! at first glance I would say the first thing are pics. Maybe find one background/location to take all of your pics so your shop is uniform. I try to take my pics the same way/direction/location.
check out a few of the SEO teams, some of your titles make it hard for you to come up in searches
titles starting with words like beautiful etc. I would not search like that as a customer :) type in a few searches for crochet items and items similar to stuff in your shop and see how the top ones are titled.
I love the shawls! Yes, some of the pictures aren't focused and/or I can't tell what the item is from the photo. And I would add more, more, more listings! You're off to a good start. :-)