http://www.etsy.com/listing/104976749/antique-bronze-blue-earringsThe title on this listing is pretty short, more would be better for etsy.
The tags match the title pretty well, there are only four words to match so it would be hard not to.
The description is short also, more would be better for google.
Pictures are clear and very well lit. Nothing especially attention grabbing. You are in a saturated market so your title, tags, and picture should be absolutely top-notch. Even then it will be hard. When I search for blue earrings, etsy gives me 180k matches, you have 22 matches in your shop, pretty long odds.
Sections look good for google.