Opinion and suggestions needed!)

[Former_Member]

Dear friends!
My name is Lyudmila, I am a designer of women's clothing!
Could you Express Your opinion about my small collection? Criticism is welcome! Thank you very much for your time!
Good luck to everyone and love!))
P.S. (Your opinion is very important for me!! Please do not misinterpret this message as hidden advertisement!! Ok?)

[weekendjewelry1]

Lyudmilla, your photos and your garments are lovely. It sounded to me like you are the designer but having a factory create your items. You have to find reasons why the customer will buy YOUR items. Give them more info and more reasons to buy.

[Former_Member]

Do you have a manufacturer you use that helps you create your clothing? if so be sure to disclose that and you have to apply for a manufacturing partnership through Etsy I think.

[Former_Member]

Dear Jen and Allysia!
Thank you for you reply. Yes, I'm not alone, I gathered a small team supporting and helping me to realize my dream. That's why I so value your opinion - to draw some inspiration, because I'm working, not so much for profit, but for the idea to do something nice. That is not industrial production, (that's why the price is rather high), but if I believe that it is in demand somewhere else, I will do everything for further work!

[weekendjewelry1]

Lyudmila, you've got a good beginning. Spend more time on your About page, talking a bit about your partnership. Then on your items, talk more about why they are expensive - you don't have to word it that way of course. The luxury fabrics, the excellent tailoring, custom fitting if that is available - things like that. And find more tags - use every one of them.

Best of luck!

[XbyAB]

Hi Lyudmila, your collection is wonderful and the pictures are great. But you need a brand around it. You need a banner that reflex your styl and like the other said tell the buyers about you and your team and fill out the policies. I think especially if you sell expensive things, your shop has to look profesional as possible. Good luck.

[Former_Member]

Your titles need better seo to be found The skirt is made of silk with embroidery you should try keywords. what i was told to was search for what you sell and look at the first page and see how other people have their titles and draw inspiration. Keywords meaning like this instead of The skirt is made of silk with embroidery try Silk Shirts- Embroidery-Knee Length Skirt-Sleeveless Shirt. Like that you can check out https://www.etsy.com/seller-handbook/article/22717244953
You can also try to advertise on this fashion blog for just 5 bucks https://www.etsy.com/seller-handbook/article/22717244953

[Former_Member]

Andrea, Jen, thank you very much!
I'll do my best!

[Former_Member]

Maxine! Thank you very much for the advice and links. I'll study it!