Hi, Finessly Carved, congratulations on your new shop! Beautiful items!
Complete your Policy page.
Complete your About page.
https://www.etsy.com/listing/244556836/japanese-samurai-laser-engraved-slim?ref=related-4I looked at this item.
Photos should be landscape orientation (1000 x 750 pixels) not portrait orientation. I couldn't tell from your thumbnail photos that you were selling phone covers. Use a contrasting background without anything to clutter your shot. IMO a straight-above shot would be better than an angled one.
The first three or four words in your title are the most important. Maybe you could begin your title with "Samurai IPhone 6 cover, laser cut Japanese cover, bamboo IPhone 6 cover, carved wooden iPhone case" etc......
Your tags should be phrases, not one word, and they need to replicate the phrases in your title.
Then in the description replicate the phrases in the title again for search engine optimization (SEO).
You can describe your case in a little more detail--what part is bamboo, what part is wood, what part is plastic e.g.
More inventory.
All the best,
Bev