Very cute jewelry. I would also recommend more pictures and more items. Add more descriptions such as materials used, how it was made and maybe even a story behind the idea for the necklace. Suggestions about who it can be a gift for would be a good addition as well. Hope this helps. I am also a new seller. Let me know if you have any suggestions for me. Thanks!
P.S. Another thing I just noticed, don't capitalize every word in the title. It makes it hard to read.