Hi Erin,
Nice pottery and photos!
Here is a website that really helped me when I started:
http://etsymentors.blogspot.com/p/critique-your-own-shop.htmlSome tips that I would give to anyone: make sure to put what your item *is* in the first three words of your title so people can find it when they are searching. For example, "Banner Stamped Clay Succulent Pot" should be rephrased so "pot" is in the first three words. Also, use ALL your 13 tags, style tags, etc! And take good photos, but you are already doing that!
Good luck!
Aman