Your shop title is the same as your shop name - I was advised to choose two or three words that described what I was selling, so that people who bounce in, know what I am about.
Make your banner exciting and attractive. Draw people into the shop. Think like a window dresser / designer.
Rewrite the welcome sentance - no repetition of words ( you use ' find ' twice in a very short sentance. Try a catchy slogan.
The white background for items is recommended by Etsy, but doesn't always work for all items. Varying the background makes it more interesting for the buyer, but the item must always stand out. Try different sorts of cloth, or grass or leaves - the colors must complement each other as does the subject matter.
Good luck and have fun !
