Definitely look at updating your profile. The person who wrote that seems so different than the person writing on here (obviously you're the same, just saying your writing style has changed... for the better).
Your items are all cute, bright and cheery! There are a few things you may want to work on that will help increase views. I really like these earrings, so I'll use this listing as an example...
http://www.etsy.com/listing/96815731/teardrop-earrings-studs-polymer-clayYour photos here are okay, but they're not going to help you stand out in a search. Maybe iron the fabric you're using, or opt for a piece of poster board or something. It looks like you're shooting in natural light, so that's good. You might also want to take those photos into a basic image editor like picasa and brighten them up a bit. Also, you're only using a couple of your photo positions, you paid for 5, use them! Take a picture with them on a model or next to a familiar item for scale, or maybe a picture of how they're packaged for shipment.
The description is very short. How big are these? What type of metal do you use for the posts? How are the posts secured? What is your turnaround time like? These are all questions people have in their minds when going to buy. I would really suggest checking out some of the other jewelers' shops in this team for some good item description examples.
And finally, your tags look good, but your title is short. Add some of those descriptions in your tags up in your title. Fill that puppy up!! That is going to help you get in the first few pages of a "blue polymer clay earrings" search (assuming you use that phrase in both your tags and titles).
I hope all that helps. Keep your head up, let the naysayers worry about what's in the dirt.