Low view...May I ask for a Critique of my Shop..

[ODDBLANC]

Hi~
I am Korean seller, Jewelry designer so not english well.
I opened on Jul 11, 2013. 76 Sales, 37 Reviews, avg today view 30~50.
But It Studies and Upgrades Photo, Keyword and Tag of SEO,
it still LOW VIEW and REVENUE....

I am asking for advise from those with Etsy experience.
I want to increase my views.
Would you please let me know what I can do to increase views, and maybe make more sales?

[LovgrenandDaughter]

Hi! you have been doing fairly well in jewelry. It is the most crowded section. With your shop you might consider having the backgrounds more uniform. For example, all listings on a book or on wood. Just make the backgrounds a little more uniform.

That way, in the first look the things that stand out the most is the piece and then one does not need to find it instead of the background. Your work is lovely. I hope google translate works well in Korean.





안녕하세요 ! 당신은 보석 에 매우 잘하고 있다 . 그것은 가장 붐비는 단면도이다 . 당신의 가게 하면배경이 보다 균일 한 데 고려할 수 있습니다. 예를 들어, 책 또는 나무에 모든 명부 . 그냥 배경 을 좀 더 균일하게 .

그런 식으로 ,먼저 가장 눈에 띄는작품이다 다음 하나는 배경 대신 찾을 필요가없는일을 찾습니다. 당신의 작품은 사랑 입니다 .


annyeonghaseyo ! dangsin-eun boseog e maeu jalhago issda . geugeos-eun gajang bumbineun danmyeondoida . dangsin-ui gage hamyeon baegyeong-i boda gyun-il han de golyeohal su issseubnida. yeleul deul-eo, chaeg ttoneun namue modeun myeongbu . geunyang baegyeong eul jom deo gyun-ilhage .

geuleon sig-eulo , meonjeo gajang nun-e ttuineun jagpum-ida da-eum hananeun baegyeong daesin chaj-eul pil-yoga-eobsneun il-eul chajseubnida. dangsin-ui jagpum-eun salang ibnida .

[ODDBLANC]

Hi~ Kristin^^
Your are so kindly and nice.
Im impressed with your kindness.
I agree your comment that it make the backgounds more uniform.
Im so helpful~
Thank you so much!!