Hi Heidi,
I am new here too. I think that you could use more photos. Your photos are all excellent, which really makes your items stand out. Maybe try a photo with a person in it? Can you get creative with that? people relate to other people in photos, create an emotion or activity/demonstration of it's use.
What I have gleened from other etsy sellers is that it takes a lot of networking and grass roots advertisiting. Two months isn't that long, so don't give up just yet.
I have joined a group in my area that meets in person and I have found that really helpful.
I am making a lot of treasuries, even if they don't get front page, a lot of people see them and you network really well that way. And it is free.
Have you tried Showcase?
You might also want to go to local shops, farmers markets, festivals, street fairs, that kind of thing. I know that will be my real bread and butter this summer and I can pass out cards and say " oh yeah, and I have an Etsy site" my hope is to keep my costumers year round.
your work is really beautiful. Priced really well. Superb photos. Just keep at it.
Tracy