I'm by no means an expert, but here's a few thoughts as just an observer/shopper/vintage lover:
Your collections are incredible & I think a more than fair price, maybe some could be priced higher
I love reading the stories about your items, making them all that more attractive
Your photos are great, but if you want to take your business to the next level, your photos need to go to the next level, too -- surf around other Etsy shops to see what really stands out as stellar.
I like seeing the rings on people's hands in the gardens, tho sometimes I find the rose maybe overpowers the ring
Here's a great tutorial for making professional looking shots with minimal cost:
http://www.handmadeology.com/studio-quality-product-photography-with-a-12-set-up/#commentsAs already mentioned, it's imperative that you ensure ALL Google searches are pointing directly to your shop, blog & website -- you can do all you want with your shop, photos, etc, but if people can't find you it's a bit unproductive
Love your blog & the great photos/stories ~ it, too, just needs to go to the next level; more polishing and ALL Google searches pointing to it
Please add the Etsy app to your blog so your shop is also embedded in your blog
If you want to be in serious business you'll need a polished, professional looking website with ALL possible Google searches going straight to your site (there's websites & then there's EFFECTIVE websites)
All the best to you ~ I look forward to hearing about your progess ~ I know that very exciting things are in store for you!