Is this where I might get advice??

[cortayloo]

Would love some advice on my new listing.. Thank you!!

http://www.etsy.com/listing/69656885/horse-girl-outfit-pants-shirt-headband

[Former_Member]

Hi! the photo is a bit on the dark side.

Did you read your description completely? You don't state what it is that you are selling anywhere other than that its a painting that you did.

Why not start off with the phrase 'Size 2 painted tshirt'? That way the buyer will know exactly what it is they are looking at.

[cortayloo]

Thank you! I need to redo all of my titles, thanks!

[HanaMauiCreations]

Cute outfit!

[AChewsy1]

I agree with crochetgal

the back ground of the wood is a bit dark and title change to add Girls "HAND" painted ensemble

[Former_Member]

really cute

[Former_Member]

Really cute outfit but I agree that your background should be lighter so they can clearly see the pants. Unless you have already changed your title, I understood it to be a set consisting of shirt, pants and headband.I think you might add a little more to your description. Good luck

[Former_Member]

I would use correct grammar. ....s and !!!!s are fun, but not overly professional.

Just a thought.

[Former_Member]

Wow, you're very talented, cortayloo! I'm a bit confused by the phrase "a custom order would have to be discussed." Does this mean that the one pictured isn't for sale? I think it might be clearer if you clarified or got rid of that line.

[Former_Member]

Very cute shop!

[Former_Member]

Perhaps you could get a little girl to model the outfit. She could be sitting on a fence with stables in the background. Try and set the scene.

When I look at this, I automatically see a 'horse crazy' little girl.

Good luck. I got some tips a little while ago about using a lightbox and/or natural light when taking pics, that might help too.